Fallen Ivory
Rushing wind. Frantic, they stand
Still. Awaiting the command for
Death. They fear, they tremble, but they're so
Loyal. They wouldn't dream of it, they wouldn't
Dare. They're cowards. Too pure, they can't...
Ivory. Defenseless. Strikingly apparent against
Onyx. The assailants have the high ground, and they
Watch. With menacing calm, they move
Forward. No remorse, with a mission-
Corruption.
It's beyond them, fighting back. They try, but
The Ivory collapse, and roll, and lie still in the
Dust. So dark, damaging, it stains their smooth
Marble. And marvel.
No morals. With new life, blackened purity
Stands. Awaiting the command for
Victory. The Ivory-
They fall.
And it's a game of chess.
End.
A/N:
In case you'd like to know exactly what this is about, here it is: it's about how we change as we grow older. Simple? Yes. Is it represented well in the poem? I dunno. You tell me.
Critiques would be great, by the way. Or any reviews at all, really, but critiques especially.
And I'm really mad at the system here. I can't seem to get this to format the way I want. Dx