Ok, so Circa 1993's review got me looking back at my story and I have to say I agree with her (or him, I don't really know seeing as it's an anonymous review.) The story did end up being unbelievable in some cases. Ok, a lot of cases.
This brought me to the conclusion that I'll go back, do a lot of editing, and post the newer version once I'm finished. That version will, hopefully, be more believable and I hope that you readers would enjoy that as much as you enjoyed the first version.
That's all for now.