So, this is the intro to a story I'm planning on writing as my first post. I'm putting this out so I can get some opinions on how I'm doing. It'll eventually be written from two character's points of view and the first full chapter will introduce the other character. Hopes you likes .

Intro

Samuel grunted in pain as his knees hit the rough pavement of the alley. Hands crushed his arms, wrenching them behind his back, where his wrists were secured in place by a set of heavy manacles, the restraints a last remnant of the methods of hunting Supernaturals in medieval times. A better, cheaper way to restrain someone with unnatural strength had yet to be invented, even though hundreds of years had passed since hunts became necessary.

Samuel bled from numerous lacerations, muscles quivering beneath livid bruises scattered across his body. He'd been the target of numerous mercenary hunter groups for the past three weeks, been chased through seventeen cities and three states, and he knew from the aches in his body and the darkness at the edges of his vision that he wouldn't be running from this group.

"Drug an' bag him," a deep voice ordered from behind. "We'll drop him with those psychos, take the money, an' get the hell outta here. I'm never taking a job from damned scientists ever again."

The voice sounded tired by the end; worn and disgusted, like he was as upset by the end of the hunt as Samuel. Samuel didn't care, didn't care that he'd been caught or that he wasn't going to be killed by the hunters. He'd stopped caring, stopped thinking, once the word 'scientists' had been growled from within the dark surrounding him. The sharp bite of the tranquilizer being injected into his arm jolted him from his stupor enough for him to feel a brief surge of fear before he lost consciousness.

He was being taken to the Lab…