AN: Here's a real treat for both fictionpress and fanfiction readers alike. Yes, I've finally completed and original piece that I've also incorporated into a fanfic. Please forgive me if the stanzas aren't separated. My computer tends to screw them up, but you'll be able to figure it out. This was inspired by some foolish behavior amongst my co-workers. Remember the one I slammed? Ohh...yeah...no you don't. Enjoy.
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What makes you think your
pale jade eyes can stare into
my soul and read it like
an uncanny popular epic?
I suppose you think that
jet black mop of curls on your head
has the right to lure me into
your presence like an elusive seduction.
Did you really think I'd allow
your towering form stand so close
your enticing cologne would
invigorate my senses like crisp air?
How dare your smile think it can play
the strings of my acoustic heart
like an outrageous electric solo,
feeding it an agonizing melody.
Since when did your sonorous voice think
it could mesmerize my fragile mind,
drowning it with unspoken lust like
a therapist might a gullible patient?
Truth is I'm too old to play these
infernal teenage games like
a fresh wide-eyed school girl.
I thought you knew better...
What the hell?
Call me.
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This poem has two titles, one for fictionpress and one for fanfiction. Tell me what you think. I appreciate your constructive input. As always, I thank all those readers and reviewers out there.
-Jae-