A thank you is in order for inspiration:
Thank you to my faithful and ever-loving reviewer owl3y3s for the inspiration to this piece. Basically… I got a review for another poem that I posted recently which simply read "Can't live with her, can't live without her." "Can and Can't" was my review reply, a little revised and reformatted but otherwise the same.
Please review--especially if you have thoughts on the comma issue.