VERY Quick little one-shot. I was bored and couldn't think of a story to put it in. Once find somewhere to put it I'll take it down and you'll probably see it reappear a little tweaked in another story.
Criticism and reviews will be greatly appreciated :)
599 words of dialogue. Usually I don't like writing dialogue, so tell me what you think...Please. This is a learning experience for me :)
Mouth Raped
"…he kissed me. I can't believe he just bloody kissed me. Grabbed me out of no where and thrust a kiss on me. No. Thrust is too quick. He cut off my oxygen supply from that kiss. That bloody kiss! That tongue. That shouldn't be allowed. Because what he did with that tongue of his, what he did with it... It should be banned. Banned from kissing. Especially kissing me. No. No he didn't kiss me, he mouth raped me. Raped my mouth. In broad daylight. With half the school stood around to cop a look. No one came to my rescue. I was brutally mouth raped and all they did was stand and gulp. How insensitive! How uncaring! Where's my knight in shining armour? Surely I deserve one after what I was subjected to! Mouth raped and no one cares. I have been violated. Violated!"
"Are you trying to say you didn't kiss him back?"
"That…that is besides the point!! I was tricked. I was trying to get him to stop. The only thing I could do in retaliation was to move my mouth obviously. It might have looked like I was kissing him back but no. No I was trying to get free. Free from the torture he was bestowing upon me. He rendered me helpless though, it was that tongue. All the tongue's fault. Keeping me stood there. Hostage. I was a hostage. Unable to move while he…he did what he did. While he raped my innocent mouth…Don't laugh! My mouth is innocent. Was! Was its innocence was taken by him. Him and his stupid mouth. My lips have been bruised, my mouth desecrated, my tongue kidnapped and forced to do unimaginable things. Terrible, terrible things and all you can do is laugh. What kind of friend are you?!"
"A jealous one."
"Jealous…jealous? What of? That disgusting creature with his horrifyingly snake-like tongue? Getting everywhere, sweeping across my lips and delving into my mouth after I obviously opened it in protest. Don't pull that face! It was in protest. You would have protested if he'd put that thing anywhere near you. I opened my mouth to gasp in horror, yes definitely horror. And then he flung it right in there! Can you believe the nerve? The nerve of that…that creature!? Taking advantage of me in my suprised and vulnerable state. And you! You didn't even try to save me. You just stood there like the rest of the rabble. Gulping like fish the lot of you, while I...I fought for my freedom."
"So you didn't like it then?"
"Why would you say that? Why? You know the answer! Him. It was him. Him and his stupidly delicious mouth and talented tongue. Of course I didn…Oh shit. Shit, shit, shit!!"
"Thought so."
"Ahhh!! Why did this happen? Why did he do it? Putting that mouth on mine. That tongue across my lips, in my mouth! I hate him! Him and his rapey mouth."
" Do you think he'll mouth rape me if I ask him to?"
"You wouldn't would you? You wouldn't ask him that. No you wouldn't, of course you wouldn't you're just joking. Just joking. You are joking right? Clare? Clare!? You are joking aren't you Clare? Clare come back here! Where are you going?! Clare!!"