Elements My first haikus I ever wrote. So don't be too hard to me though constructive criticism is welcome.



Fire
eater of two worlds
is as well earth's garden's as
heaven's shine and end

Water
falling from heaven
rising again to the clouds
circling forever

Earth
mother of humans
being stepped on each day
never knowing why

Air
dreamer's element
spirit to the living world
in a thoughtful breeze




Like I told you, these are my first, and until today I didn't like haikus, but I read some really good ones and decided to write some myself. I know they're not very good, but please review and tell me what I can make better.