Urg, I don't know if this poem is that great. Please tell me if you think it sucks.

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It burns and flairs with constant aching

A silvery fire

Angel wings soar ever higher

Their voices sing with deep desire

A silvery fire

How long can it burn

Angel wings soar ever higher

Will this ever stop?

How long can it burn?

Please sing a little louder

will this ever stop?

Their wings are breaking

Please sing a little louder

Angel wings soar ever higher

their wings are breaking

it burns and flairs with constant aching