My first attempt at poetry... Be nice, but please bear in mind that I want to improve.


But can they hear me Lord, when I cry out so loud?
I feel You moving in me; I try to make You proud.
Will they ever listen? It's causing me this pain,
I know You really love them; O let me try again.

We talk of You, and all I do is laugh,
I'm filled with good intentions but it's not on Your behalf,
You gave Your life for me, I haven't done a thing,
I need to bow to You again, and crown You as King.

So please Lord, come to me I pray,
And help me through each dark and lonely day.
They need You so much, how can I ever see,
That You'll give them just as much as You gave me.


If you liked that, (shameless plug) you might like my novel. There's not much so far, it won't take long to read. God bless!