Like Poetic Hearts
Edge through those paved contours.
Sketching memory, marking scalds
Upon a bark, skin peeling like
Pistachio flakes; mindful mysteries
Mindlessly pried open. Caught curious.
Like seeking wintery leaves on
Amidst sweet summer sweat.
Bitter blue ice like butterflies of
Emotion. Those tattered wings
Like hallelujah whispered hymns. Epiphany
Sends us drowning, like aspiration
Drug-high. We let go those
Thoughts like spinning tops awry.
Beating sun like
Watered waves of gold. Nectar
Spills itself onto the grass
Skating skin. Such swishing sensory.
Pen gripped in hand. Sensuously fibrous white
Sheets of imprinted words now
Suspend like dangling dew drops waiting
For painful dimensions, dams of mind
To pour and send them swirling down,
Like in glassy melting winds where
Hurricane rounded sounds
My rain pelts of the heart.
A/N: Unedited and unrefined. Hoping someone would review and give me a critique of the poem so I can actually work on my writing. I haven't gotten a review in forever.