Rude, You break me down with your harsh words
instead of listening to my heart speak. No one on
earth could shut it down better than you could. I
couldn't believe you could do such a horrible thing
to a female's heart especially mine like that. You
hated my stories for no apparent reason because
you refuse to appreciate my talent. All I wanted for
you to give me was positive and constructive criticism.
Your comments were as bitter sweet as my heavenly
dawn. Offended, I couldn't keep holding on to serenity
and unity in our imaginary world. According to you, I
was a mentally retarded and ugly swan. I didn't
understand how you could judge me if you have
never seen my beautiful face or walked in my shoes.
I may be an ugly swan, but I still have my dreams and