A/N: my first poem on this site x) hope you like it!!

p.s. I was going through a depressed stage at this time in my life, BUT I AM NOT SUICIDAL. No need to call the crazy cops on me or anything.

Do you hear me now?
Lying on the cold floor
Running in when you heard the 'pow'
And see the horrific gore.

Would you listen to me
As you never did before?
Would you finally see
How broken I was inside, how sore?

Would you look at me
With revulsion on your face
Or would you gaze at me pitifully
And see your daughter out of place?

All I ever wanted
Was to make you proud
But all I ever got
Was scorn.

Do you love me now?

r.e.v.i.e.w.

please?

;]