Thank you so much for all your kind words about this story. You have been wonderful, and I wish I had read them all sooner. Unfortunately, I don't receive e-mail updates from FP because I don't really use this account for much anymore.
This is also means that I didn't notice that when I was supposed to have taken this story down back in May for publishing. So now I will, very unfortunately, have to remove it because it is extremely unprofessional to have a story posted to a free site at the same time.
Again, thanks for everything. Pas Comme Ca will be available for reading at less than three press . com (without the spaces, obviously).