Hi! I'm new here and I'd like to know what I can improve to be a better writter .

Be yourself

Smile when everyone is sad,

Run when everyone is staying,

Laugh when everyone is crying.

Survive in the darkness,

Live in the light,

Be unique when the world's the same,

Be yourself whenever you can.

Jump when everyone is falling,

Love when everyone is hating,

Cry when your heart is broken.

Live in the light,

Survive in the darkness,

Be human when the world's like robots,

Be yourself whenever you like.

Please review ! Thanks!