Hi Everyone. I hope that you like this poem. I wrote it at midnight during one of the school holidays and am pretty proud of it. This is one of my first fiction works to be posted on this website. I'd love some reviews and I don't care whether it's constructive criticism or just saying well done. :D No flames please.


City Night

The streets are lit by yellow lights

As cars stream past on the highway

The wonders of the night sky lost

To the bustling of the city

Slowly the big city falls asleep

As the traffic slows to a halt

And apartment lights flicker out

The wan moon slowly rising up

Stars cautiously showing themselves

As small pinpricks against the sky

The night sky an inky darkness

As the big city starts to dream


Review please?