Hey! Below is a poem I wrote while on school camp. I hope that you enjoy it. Just for reference I named the butterfly Annabelle and stayed near me the whole time I wrote the poem. Review please?


Umbrawarra Gorge Camp

The playful stream is running by

The trees overhanging its course

Large cliffs overshadow the stream

Sunlight glancing off the surface

A black butterfly sits nearby

Overlooking the hurried ants

As they travel their busy path

Across the rocks towards the tree

Flies buzz nearby, never at rest

The silent wind shoos them away

And caresses my hot body

Before moving down the gully

The sun will set on the gully

I'll be up at the campsite

Unable to witness the sight

Where the rocks turn purple down here