Hey! Below is a poem about Middletone Beach. I have spent many fun days swimming there and wrote this poem last year. Unfortunately the website is currently not letting me have breaks after every four lines but I'll try to fix it another time. Review please?


Middleton Beach

The sun beats down onto the sand

Turning it to molten pebbles

The gentle breeze blows the sea spray

Across the beach and up the cliff

The breakers roll in one by one

Crash down a hundred metres out

Hear a swish as foaming water

Comes in to shore to lap and play

The surfers are way out the back

Catching the massive breakers

The children play and boogie board

In the gentle, shallow waters

The sun passes over the horizon

And darkness falls across the beach

The small creatures come out to play

And scuttle along the pale seashore