This is the first song that me and my BFF wrote together so it might be horrible

Dead Rose

Every time I see a rose it reminds me of us

The time you went along and broke all our trust

I never forgot the day

When you took me by the hand

Told me all your secrets

I thought you were my friend

Now the rose has burned beyond ashes

And my heart has had to many crashes

While most people when shot

Would die

But you wouldn't even cry

You have no heart

You have no soul

And you simply wonder why

You're a dead rose

I remember the tears that fell

Because of all your stupid lies

All the times you made me cry

You were thinking

Of ways to make it worse

Now the rose has burned beyond ashes

And my heart has had to many crashes

While most people when shot

Would die

But you wouldn't even cry

You have no heart

You have no soul

And you simply wonder why

You're a dead rose

I remember you calling me the fallen angel

But what did you see from your side of the angle

Playing this stupid game

Telling lies and stories

It's all the same

We will never be the same

Now the rose has burned beyond ashes

And my heart has had to many crashes

While most people when shot

Would die

But you wouldn't even cry

You have no heart

You have no soul

And you simply wonder why

You're a dead rose

And now I stare at the empty floor

Praying that there will be no pain

Not anymore

We had all those meaningless fights

That held me back from taking flight

But now the plane is on a crash course

Will this be the end

R&R please I need feedback cuz personally I think Im horrible at writing mut my BFF is always saying that I'm really amazing (yet when I say shes amazing she doesn't believe me) and I want to know if shes not just being nice