Crystal of your soul

The portal to my universe

My precious gem, your eyes are

A/N : A second try of a haiku before going to bed. I gave a bit more thought to this one. This is inspired by my lover's eyes. They are the most beautiful eyes I have ever seen. And rare. Anyhow, I hope you have liked it. Now tell me, what do you think? Any advise on how can I get better? Feel free to say anything you want~ See ya~