Hello there! I rarely write poems... so, here is one of them! :) Enjoy!


The feelings you give are overwhelming,

Hope your sweet face is not just pretending,

Wish your flattering words would keep flowing,

I wish that these things you would be hearing.

I wish this friendship could last forever,

Hope you'd never ever be heart-breaker,

When you tell me never to surrender,

All challenges I'm able to conquer.

But will I ever be special to you,

I wish that all my dreams with you came true,

Then your eyes pierced mine and say 'I love you',

Finally I say that 'I love you too'. 3

1/13/11 9:45 pm

REVIEW PLEASE :) Give constructive criticism.