Hello there! I rarely write poems... so, here is one of them! :) Enjoy!
The feelings you give are overwhelming,
Hope your sweet face is not just pretending,
Wish your flattering words would keep flowing,
I wish that these things you would be hearing.
I wish this friendship could last forever,
Hope you'd never ever be heart-breaker,
When you tell me never to surrender,
All challenges I'm able to conquer.
But will I ever be special to you,
I wish that all my dreams with you came true,
Then your eyes pierced mine and say 'I love you',
Finally I say that 'I love you too'. 3
1/13/11 9:45 pm
REVIEW PLEASE :) Give constructive criticism.