My second poem, kind of dark. Please let me know what you think of it.


A single tear, bloody dawn awake,

Haunting whispers hidden within the shadows,

A sorrowing breeze,

A foolish nightmare with childish fears,

A fake smile, hollow joy,

An infant that is dead inside,

Glassy stares, unseeing yet aware of all,

Glimmer of hope put out like a flame,

Dying breaths and tortured souls,

An innocent face seems so old,

Day and night are one and the same,

An endless darkness,

Starving hands grab and rip,

A flash of once gleaming teeth,

Crimson red sky,