I feel like I am drowning

I long to be dying

With death the pain all fades away

All anguish and sorrow will decay


I feel like I am burning

A fire consuming

Dancing flame, flickering flame

All life is nothing but a game


I long to stop the pain

The pain of drowning, of burning, again

I am drowning in gloom

Until the time of my doom


Everything is alright

There is no everlasting night

The pain is gone, the pain which I hate

All I had to do, was wait

So, please tell me what you think. It's probably not very good, it's been a while since it was written. It is all one poem, the dots are to separate it into stanzas...