Eternal Teardrops

Eternal teardrops

Falling, falling

Tears of blood

Tears for loved ones

Dead.

Screaming, crying

Teardrops falling

Will this ever end?

Wars go on raging

Tears keep on falling

Soon there shall be

No more tears

Left to cry.


I'd appreciate some advice, and I expect that this poem isn't very good. I was about twelve when I wrote it, so...