Here is the rewritten version of Criss Cross Chronicles: Magia. This is edited for book format instead of script format with some changes. Enjoy!
Episode1: Kazuka and Kazia's prelude
Our story begins on March 31 in the year 2264, on a world known as Trimeria. A boy walks into the living room of his new home in the evening. He wears a blue undershirt with a black short sleeve jacket, black jeans, a silver key chain that hung from two belt loops, and black fingerless gloves that had a blue circle on the back of each one. His skin was slightly pale while his hair was raven colored, long enough to cover only his forehead. The tips were frosted to look blue, matching the color scheme that his clothes had. He was slightly tall with a slim yet athletic physique.
Inside the living room is a girl. She had the same blue frosted hair as the boy, long enough to reach her waist. She also had beautiful blue eyes, the same color as sapphire stones. She had the same colored skin as the boy. She wore a sky blue colored blouse, one that had no sleeves or shoulders. She had a short sleeved, black jacket that stopped above her waist. She also wore a black skirt, one that stopped barely above her knees. On her shirt was a blue stripe going around the bottom, the same color blue as her blouse. She also wore blue nail polish, having only her fingernails polished.
"So, we're living on our own now huh?" said the boy to the girl. A frontal view of the boy shows that he looks almost exactly like the girl, revealing that they are identical twins. "Looks that way." said the girl in response. "We have no idea where dad has been for years, and imo-chan was with him." Imo-chan is a way that one would address a younger sister, revealing that there is another sibling to the twins. The boy sighs, sitting down beside the girl as he says "What do we do now?" as he scratches his head. "We're already registered in school and we're okay with everything home-wise." The girl adds "We even have our uniforms. That's all I can think of."
Looking up at the ceiling the boy then mentions "I hope we'll continue to have Cita coming in." Cita is the currency that the world uses, exactly worth one Japanese Yen. In response, the girl says "Our parents' job is obligated to pay us what they would have earned each year. From it, we should get over two million Cita every year." Being prudent and responsible, the boy replies "It may be a lot, but we should still keep a budget on that."
Curious about their situation, the girl asks "Onii-chan, do you think we can handle living on our own like this?" Onii-chan is a way to address an older brother, revealing that the boy is the older twin. Being blunt, the boy responds "Whether we'll be okay or not, we don't have a choice." Then as a joke-like comment, he then adds "If you're really my twin, you should have thought that like I did." The girl replies "Very funny, but at least we can 'play' with each other alone like this." with a smirk on her face. The boy shakes his head and responds "You've got to stop joking and teasing me like that…" The girl smiles and says "You and I know that we wouldn't really do that though." She then thinks to herself "I'll have to change tactics about teasing him like that however." The boy thinks at the same moment "Maybe we aren't as alike as I thought." Afterward, the two leave the room to have dinner. Then they each go to their respective rooms. The boy enters the room with a sign on the door, a sign that reads "Kazuka". The girl enters a second room, one with a sign reading "Kazia". After entering their rooms, the two twins go to sleep for the remainder of the evening.
End of episode
This is a nice, more detailed, yet slower start to the Magia storyline. Episode 2 is to come soon!