Hi there. This is my first post on here, so I would really like to know what you guys think of it. Also, would it be better if I split it into stanzas?


Some people hide behind a wall.

But not me.

I have buried myself in a hole.

What you see, what you know,

Is what I have left above the ground

For anybody to see.

If they actually look.

But if you want to know more,

You actually have to care

Enough to start digging.

Slowly, as you romove more dirt,

You will uncover things about me.

The speed of that journey will depend upon

Your weapon of choice,

Maybe a shovel or a spoon,

And be how often you dig.

Don't worry if you hit a rock,

As there are quite a few around.

Just work hard and

Get it out of the way.

I will understand if you give up

Before you reach the bottom of my whole.

Nobody has made it yet.