A/N: This is my first story so please no flames and please review. Enjoy!
(And BTW, I'm not from America and I don't really know how to speak English very well, unlike my partner, AJ.B)
The Computer Maniac
"Mommy! Mommy! I want to use the computer!" said Jonathan. But there was no answer. Jonathan was scared that his Mommy was kidnapped or what. So he just took a nap. He had a very scary dream. In his dream, there was this big computer and it was the computer he wanted to use awhile ago. His mom was also there, but she fainted. Jonathan realized that he has more interest in computers than his mom.
"Whoa! That was so scary!" frightened Jonathan.
"Mom! Where are you? Where are you?" worried Jonathan.
"I am here Joe. I just went to your Aunt Mirby's House." said Mom.
"Mommy! Mommy! You're here! You're here!" cheerful Jonathan.
"Why my dear? What happened?" asked Mom.
"It's a long story!" Jonathan said, as he leaned in to whisper in his mother's ear.
So how was it? And are any of you willing to beta read for me? Thanks! Please review!