well this is my first ever posting my poems i've ever wrote tell me your feedbacks if you can .Blackxstarkid


THIS GREY COLORLESS WORLD
Only thing I see
is a colorless world
that has no significance.
Black and White,
clashing with each other
a fight that we'll dull over to grey...

Grey Clouds...
Grey Skies...
Grey Storms...
Just...Grey
No Colorful words which some think its ok
No Crayons to stop the baby's crying
No Genuine words to keep from suicide
No Memories because it causes you to dream in colors

No Dreams...Just a Dull filling,

that melts into nothing,
that leaves a hole in you,
that can never be filled.

You cry at night wishing...
wishing to have colors
colors that brightened your day
colors to distract you from the hatred
colors that bring back memories
of a loved one...
of your family...
your mother...
your father...
your brother...
your sister...
your friends...

But all you can see is a colorless world
filled with hate...
...torture...
...Death...
and now you sit here looking at the sky
oh how you wish you could have saw the color
wondering how didn't I see it...

This beautiful colorful world...
only a single tear, can people notice your Absurdity
the sky all blue in its color...
white clouds float more heavenly...
The blazing sun stinging your eyes...

Oh why couldn't I see the colors in this world
was it because I was hiding in the past...
Was it because I only thought of my pain and not others...
or was it because hatred clouded me from this world...
If only I could go back...
back in time where I use to see these colors

but now it's too late...
for I am already on my death bed...
Looking death straight in to its eyes…
Those cold...shallow eyes
only death hangs in them
if…only...
if only I could reach up and just pull its mask off
please if there really is a god up there...
Please give me another chance...
another chance to see this world for what it is…
not what it could be...


Plz Reviwe^^