Hey, I am kind of new to song writing, so please give me some pointers.

(Intro):

Have you ever noticed how much bigger, the gray sky looks when you see it alone?

Have you ever noticed how much longer, time seems to take, when you're waiting alone?

(opening music. . .)

Dreaming all day in the field grass wet with morning rain.

Dreaming all night in the field grass wet with evening pain.

(bridge)

Can't fight back but I won't give up.

I'm up against the wall and can't think of anything, to do anymore!
(Chorus)

Sunlight streaming through a stained glass window, dancing on the wall.

Countless photos of helpless people, hanging in the hall.

If you can see past the dark present, this future will surely be yours. . .

(instruments play. . .)

Have you ever listened to the wind blow, through the trees, when you feel alone?

Have you ever listened to the voices, that cry for help, 'cos they feel alone?

(bridge)

Racing away from the city scape that I'm dreaming of,

nonstop decay that eats everything in its path!

(chorus)

Whispering in my ears, the voices of years gone!

Helping hands that are so far away, reach into the dawn!

Can you help me, escape this madness,

my future is already yours. . .

(outro)

Have you ever noticed how much bigger the gray sky looks, when you see it alone?

Have you ever noticed how much longer, times seems to take, when you're waiting alone?