Well, this is my first rhymey-poem I've published here. Hope you like it!
You climb up the mountain, eyes cast on the sky,
focused only on reaching the top.
The rock beneath your foot crumbles and breaks,
though you're far too busy to see it drop.
Even the memory of us drifts away,
and you forget how we lifted you up,
how we trusted and loved you
and never gave up.
Now, all that matters is joining the gods-
escaping from our world of the small.
But when you finally arrive at the peak, look down.
Because we might not be there to break your fall.
So… Yeah! Please leave a review. I'd love to know if you loved it, hated it, didn't care about it at all, honestly any feedback is great.