Yay! Another song thing! Sorry I'm posting so many of these, but I'm practicing. I wrote this one last March, so it's kind of meh. I edited it a little bit today, but not much. But it has features that I like so I figured I'd post it. Enjoy!


If I Could Say Anything

If I could say anything
I'd get my revenge
You'd regret ever hurting me
You'd never hurt me again

But I'm too busy trying to help
Trying to be good to you
Never gettin' anything back
Never standin' up to you
I wish I could
I wish I could

If I could say anything
I'd tell you off so hard
You'd never get the chance
To give me all these scars

I tried to give you something
Then you took it all
I tried to help you climb
You just watched me fall
I wish I could
I wish I could

If I could say anything
I'd get my revenge
You'd regret ever hurting me
You'd never hurt me again

If I could say anything
I'd tell you off so hard
You'd never get the chance
To give me all these scars

I'd break my back for you
I'd bleed, I'd die, I'd cry for you
But you don't care
You can't even pretend
To give a damn
So why should I?
Oh, why should I?

If I could say anything
I'd get my revenge
You'd regret ever hurting me
You'd never hurt me again

If I could say anything
I'd tell you off so hard
You'd never get the chance
To give me all these scars

I'd say it all
You know I'd say it all
Oh, how I wish I could
I wish I could


So, that's over. Hope you didn't hate it.

Because there are parts of it that I hate. Namely, the "I'd tell you off so hard" line. I don't remember if I hated that when I first wrote it, but now that I read it, I don't like it. It kind of throws me off; does it throw you off too? If you can, give me some feedback on that please.

Also, I hate the word "oh." I just thought I'd throw that out there. XD

Anywho, if you've got time, I'd love it if you could shoot me a review! I haven't gotten any feedback on my songs yet, and I'm interested in what people have to say!