I have no other way of reaching you.
I have received your review and I agree with you. This story needs to be toldmin two seperate volumes.
Please find me on Inkitt as I ama bout to get published. I can no longer post updates or stories for "free" , That was one of the conditions of the publisher.
However please navigate to my wiki - I can not post links here, but you can find it by typing GalNet wiki into Google.
Your review is there and a detailed answer to your review.