Here's my first ever submission on this site! I wrote this in about 20 minutes at about midnight when I was 13.
Everyone says we were made for each other
When we can barely recognize one another
Though we act like none of it matters
It's like the slightest change could make me shatter
Over the years we drift apart
But is it worth the breaking heart
Now I realize everyone was right
And I know I can never make you see the light
How can you be so blind?
When the one I once knew I cannot find
Then you claim that I've changed too
When the only one I can think about is you
That's the way it's always been
I just haven't known it; until just then
And so I keep my voice quiet
When all I want to do is cause a riot
Why can't you see past my smile
And why can't we just sit and talk a while
I can see your patience wearing thin
And then I realize I cannot, will not, shall not, win
Please tell me what you thought of this in a review. I would really appreciate it!