Just a note that I started querying out EDGEPORT. I thank you all for the reviews and the support. Either way, this version of the story is growing obsolete with all the editing that's been done. If you're still aching to read a version of the book, there's a slightly more updated (but definitely not final) draft of the book on my website (link on my profile).
Once again, thank you all for reading, and hopefully I'll have some good news soon!