Update
I'm in the process of uploading the revised chapters of this story.
I wanted to put this here to thank everyone that has given input, support, and critique because there's no way I could have finished it (much less made it through the revision process) without y'all.
Through the next week I'll be putting up the new versions of chapters. About 90% of the changes are superficial editing adjustments, so you won't miss out on anything if you don't feel like reading the new version.
Thanks again