A.N. Hey guys, I know it's been a really long time since I've posted anything on here and I'm sorry about that, I just haven't exactly had any inspiration to write or I have been too critical of my writing to even post it. I've been writing a lot of poetry here lately and thought I might share this with you all and get your opinions on it. Anyways Enjoy these and let me know what you think. Any criticism is welcome, and I'd really appreciate it!

Struck

Intoxicating was the way his touch felt against my skin

The way he set my flesh a flame with the slightest brush

As the sizzling heat made its way throughout my blood

Making me crave more of him

Hypnotizing was the way his voice sounded when he

Spoke the way I couldn't help but listen to his words

As they moved through the air poetically conveying

A need to be heard

Intense was the way his stare penetrated my soul

Exposing every inch of myself to him to investigate

As his needing gaze kept me locked in this trance

Rendering me powerless to his passions

Captivating was the way he held my attention

Perplexing me by his enigmatic movements as

We danced around the fire of desire into the

Depths of this dark abyss

A.N. So what'd you all think? Should I continue or just stop? Please Review and feel free to tell me what's going through your mind about these...