Hello this is a quick poem I wrote I hope you enjoy and please review.


Hatred it's a fire burning inside

Incinerating all other emotions but itself

It refuses to be extinguished

Even if it has destroyed all there is

It will ignite

It will consume

It will turn your soul to ashes

Changing who you are

Hardening your heart

Hatred will keep destroying

Until there is nothing left to burn

Please give me ideas. It would truly help. I would love to hear your thoughts and feelings on this poem. Thank you and good luck.