Hello this is a quick poem I wrote I hope you enjoy and please review.
Hatred it's a fire burning inside
Incinerating all other emotions but itself
It refuses to be extinguished
Even if it has destroyed all there is
It will ignite
It will consume
It will turn your soul to ashes
Changing who you are
Hardening your heart
Hatred will keep destroying
Until there is nothing left to burn
Please give me ideas. It would truly help. I would love to hear your thoughts and feelings on this poem. Thank you and good luck.