These are technically lyrics to go along with a story I'm writing about a young woman who wants to get rid of her 'child star' image. I'm more of a poet than a song writer, so any and all help/criticism is greatly appreciated.
I'm screaming in a language
no one seems to understand
I've been caught between heaven
and a cold and lonely hell.
Now I've forgotten what it's like
to dream my own dreams
cause your eyes flash like lights
and they're blinding me.
Suddenly I blinked and it's been seven years
seven wasted years too long.
and I'm so tired and I'm so lonely
I pretend this is what I want.
So I'll keep screaming til you start listenin
cause what's a life lived this way?
That I'd give up everything just for a minute
just a single second
you'd hear what I say