To any who are somehow following this since I posted it so long ago I'd like to inform you of some form of good news. I am going to be rewriting this story. It'll re-use the basic ideas and characters from here, but it'll get rid of a lot of the poor writing (not that I have really gotten any better XD) and remove a chunk of the unoriginal and and strange details I added.
I'll be deleting this version shortly before posting the new one (which I really ought to start working on soon).
Due to how rarely I feel inspired it may be a while before it is made so I wouldn't want to get hopes up, but it is something I very much intend on doing.