This is my first song, and I guess there's deeper symbolism, which (I think) gets more apparent as the song...progresses. Because I'm an amateur at this, please review to tell me if I should write more songs or if I should hang myself...*_*


Pandora

When the day comes,
I won't be ready.
You'll take me apart
you were always too hungry...

Voices screaming in my head,
watching, laughing, as I bled,
paper thoughts begin to fade,
crumbling into a red haze--

This bitter honey
running through my head,
disgracing me,
whenever I wanted to think.

Voices screaming in my head,
watching, laughing, as I bled,
paper thoughts begin to fade,
crumbling into a red haze--

Distracting Pandora,
whittling at my senses.
Unfeeling anymore,
You always were my muse.

Voices screaming in my head,
watching, laughing, as I bled,
paper thoughts begin to fade,
crumbling into a red haze--

*Divine Pandora, always my muse...
Leading me to my disgrace...
You know I can never refuse...
When you take me to that place...

Voices screaming in my head, (they're tearing at me)
watching, laughing, as I bled, (ripping me apart)
paper thoughts begin to fade, (save me, Pandora)
crumbling into a red haze...(save me...)



FIN

~*~ Okay, this was my first dabble at songwriting, so it's probably not good. I need some reviews and criticism (as long as it's the constructive kind). ^_^