Title: Still Waiting
Author: RaliNeoBlade
Author's Notes: I wrote this in Algebra and was surprised at how well it came out. Anyway, it's a poem about what every teenager goes through(yes, I'm included)...depression. Read and see if you like! BTW, I totally own, no taking w/o my permission.
Life can be so hard at times
I need a helping hand
I reach out for others but soon find
I'm alone. By myself.
I'm cold.
When no one's there to help me
I go it all alone
Sometimes I'm not enough, though, so
I fail. By myself.
I'm empty.
When no one's there to comfort me
I push it down inside
But it has to come up sometimes, so
I cry. By myself.
I'm scared.
That's the way it goes, then
Until someone breaks the ring
'Til I reach out for others and
I find someone. With them,
I'd be warm.
That's how it'll continue
Until someone stops the wheel
'Til I don't have to go alone, and
I succeed. With them,
I'd be light.
It'll go on that way
Until someone brings me out
'Til the pain comes up, and
They hold me when I cry. With them,
I could hope.
But it's still going that way
The wheel keeps turning
I haven't been brought out
So I'm still waiting
And there's not much hope.
RaliNeoBlade: Yes, welcome to my life...What did you think? Am I insane? RATE from 1-10, please! Reviews are appreciated!
Author: RaliNeoBlade
Author's Notes: I wrote this in Algebra and was surprised at how well it came out. Anyway, it's a poem about what every teenager goes through(yes, I'm included)...depression. Read and see if you like! BTW, I totally own, no taking w/o my permission.
Life can be so hard at times
I need a helping hand
I reach out for others but soon find
I'm alone. By myself.
I'm cold.
When no one's there to help me
I go it all alone
Sometimes I'm not enough, though, so
I fail. By myself.
I'm empty.
When no one's there to comfort me
I push it down inside
But it has to come up sometimes, so
I cry. By myself.
I'm scared.
That's the way it goes, then
Until someone breaks the ring
'Til I reach out for others and
I find someone. With them,
I'd be warm.
That's how it'll continue
Until someone stops the wheel
'Til I don't have to go alone, and
I succeed. With them,
I'd be light.
It'll go on that way
Until someone brings me out
'Til the pain comes up, and
They hold me when I cry. With them,
I could hope.
But it's still going that way
The wheel keeps turning
I haven't been brought out
So I'm still waiting
And there's not much hope.
RaliNeoBlade: Yes, welcome to my life...What did you think? Am I insane? RATE from 1-10, please! Reviews are appreciated!