Hey, this is a poem I wrote last year during a writing class. I got an A on it so I decided that I might as well post it to see if it wasn't that bad or my teacher was just feeling sorry for me! I REALLY LIKE REVIEWS!

All Alone

All alone

In the dark

The sounds of a woman's sultry laughter

A rough groan that was her father's

Door slamming

Soft, rhythmatic creaking

Louder now

Six years old and all alone