This story was published a while back, but I just finished it this past week or so. I'm really proud of it, but I think it's kind of rough and I'd like some constructive criticism, please. The title is The Art of Deception.10/19/2007 #1
I'm game for reviewing others' stories, as well.
If you happen to read my story and enjoy it, then I'm writing a semi-sequel called Double Crosser that you might be interested. Anyways, thanks in advance for any and all help.
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