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Fractured Illusion

This is the place to come if you want reviews for a poem, and the review type is "easy fix", aka a simple review.

For Review Game rules and some fun facts, go to "Read this first!".


FAQ: ยป Two or more people have reviewed the same person! What happens now? Answer


Moving on, this is the basic structure of the Review Game:

Person 1 says: Review "My Lucky Dream"!

Person 2 says: Ok, I reviewed "My Lucky Dream", ch 2. So can the next person please review "Stereotypes" or "Window"?

Person 3 says: Done (I did "Window" chapter 4), so can the next person review "Stranger"? Thanks.

This means the first one to post here doesn't have to review another person. Aka, first to come gets a freebie. So, hurry!


For Poem Easy Fix, your review needs to fulfill these requirements, otherwise you will not be seen as someone who has fulfilled their obligation and you can thus not participate.


You need to state one thing you liked and *why*, and one thing you didn't like/could be improved, and *why*. Giving more feedback is not prohibited, but giving less than this is. Flaming is also prohibited. Being constructive is not.

If you absolutely can only find good or less good things to say, then please state two things you liked and *why*, or two things you didn't like and *why*. The review will be seen as invalid otherwise.

Restating the same thing does not count as a why. "I really enjoyed the piece because I thought it was very enjoyable" does not count as a why. "I really enjoyed the piece. It was enjoyable because the subject was relateable" does count as a why.

Phrases like "no mistakes" or "good job" do not count as a like. If you cannot find a dislike then write another distinct like do not say "there are no mistakes." That will not count. Saying "good job" or other similar phrases will not count as a like on a piece either. It is not specific.

Here are templates to ensure your review clearly fulfills the qualifications, you can use any of them if you choose, but they are not required:

1) I liked... because.... I disliked... because...

2) I liked... because... I liked... because...

3)I disliked... because... I disliked... because...

If you are still unsure on how the review requirement for Easy Fix is viewed, look at this post for guidance.

Note: Commenting on summary and/or title will not count.



11/11/2007 . Edited 3/28/2011 #1
Sercus Kaynine
Wow, it looks like I'm the first to post! Hmm... I don't have any specific requests right now, but I've only got a couple of poems written. A review for any of them would be nice.
11/11/2007 #2
A Perfect Sonnet
Hi! I reviewed [s:2385362:The Sercus]. Would someone review [s:2275902:Our Algebra] for me? Thank you!
11/12/2007 #3
done our algebra. just posted "a self tour" and would appreciate someone taking a look. :) thanks! -Lefty
11/13/2007 #4
Demented Hellion
Reviewed A Self Tour. Someone please review Shadows
1/2/2008 #5
Esther Jade
I've reviewed "Shadows". I would appreciate someone having a looking at "Anger Redefined".
1/15/2008 #6
Vanilla Tea
I reviewed "Anger Redefined". Will someone please review "My beautiful love for you" "Wash away" or "Insane".
2/18/2008 #7
I reviewed "Wash away". Can someone please review "Glass Coffin" or "Under the Electric lights"?
2/20/2008 #8
I reviewed "Under the Electric Lights" =) Could someone please review "If He Knew" or "Fairytale"? Thanks so much! -WxOxW
2/21/2008 #9
Hey I just reviewed "If He Knew". can sombody come review "You Captured My Heart"? thanks ~angel953
2/21/2008 #10
Vanilla Tea
I reviewed "You Captured My Heart." Could somebody review either "Dawn," "Give Me A Rose," or "I Told Myself"? thanks.
2/21/2008 #11
I just reviewed "I Told Myself". @Sanity's Brink: If you don't think I did good enough on the review bc I couldn't find something I didn't like, I would be glad to review something else. Just let me know and I'll get right on it. As for my work, can somone please R&R either "I Love You, And That Will Never Change", "Mistake", or "Hero"? thanks ~angel953
2/21/2008 #12
I reviewed Mistake. Can someone please R&R Glass Coffin (or Under the Electric Lights, I just reformatted it and added punctuation today)?
2/21/2008 #13
I reviewed Glass Coffin. Can someone plz R&R "But It's Never Enough"? Thanks ~angel953
2/21/2008 #14
Reviewed "But It's Never Enough" Great job angel953! =) You can review whatever you please. --WxOxW
2/21/2008 #15
i reviewed "The Art Of Being Rejected". can someone plz R&R "Summer" or "Wedge"? @WxOxW: thanks for the kind words and the review!! thanks ~angel953
2/21/2008 #16
I reviewed "Summer" Please review "I Trusted You" or "Hidden Plea"? Thank you so much! Angel953-- Anytime! And same for you reviewing my stories! --WxOxW
2/21/2008 #17
I reviewed "I Trusted You". Could someone review "Letter From A Friend"? Thanks ~angel953
2/21/2008 #18
Vanilla Tea
I reviewed "Letter From A Friend". Could someone please review "All Was Well" or "Black"?
2/21/2008 #19
I reviewed "All Was Well". awesome poem =) Could someone please review "Hidden Plea" or "The Art of Being Rejected"? Thanks so much! --WxOxW
2/21/2008 #20
I reviewed "Hidden Plea" Can someone plz review either "Time" or "No Good Friend"? Thanks ~angel953
2/21/2008 #21
I reviewed Time. Can someone please review "The End of Sanity"?
2/21/2008 #22
I reviewed "The End Of Sanity". Can someone review "No Good Friend"? Thanks ~angel953
2/22/2008 #23
Reviewed "No Good Friend" Can someone review for me? Whichever suits your fancy. Thanks so much! --WxOxW
2/22/2008 #24
I reviewed"Boys Don't Matter". Could someone review either "Make The Most Of The Inevitable", or "GoodBye"? Thanks ~angel953
2/22/2008 #25
Esther Jade
Done "Goodbye". One of my "A Hard Holiday" poems (I have four - any one would be great), please. Thanks!
2/22/2008 #26
I reviewed "A Hard Holiday" (poem #2) Can someone please review "Make The Most Of The Inevitable"? Thanks ~angel953
2/22/2008 #27
Vanilla Tea
I reviewed "Make the Most of the Inevitable" (really great poem xD ) Could someone review "Returning the Favor"? thanks.
2/22/2008 #28
Esther Jade
Done "Returning the Favour". Any of my "A Hard Holiday" poems, please. Thanks.
2/22/2008 #29
Landon Stray
I finished "A Hard Holiday". Can someone review "Only, Lonely, Lovely, Beautiful Girl" or "People"? Thanks.
2/22/2008 #30
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