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I did Curse of Moon. Needs some editing, but it'll be good.

Palphor's Crystal please! I just changed it from its previous format: Instead of breaking it up into six chapters, I just posted it in its original format of two. It feels long to me now, so I hope you dont get tired ;)


3/23/2008 #421
Done "Palphor's Crystal"

Chapter Six "Letting Go" please.


-Kaiyako K.

3/23/2008 #422
LG done! ^^

Chapter two, because it is new--would you?

Or chapter one will also do.


3/23/2008 #423
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I am an idiot. I forgot to skip to page 9, and reviewed "Princess" from the bottom of page 1.

Ah well, there's a freebie for ya :)


3/23/2008 . Edited 3/23/2008 #424
Fractured Illusion
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@BlindmansWorkshop - I am not sure what purpose your post have, but since you reviewed for the RG, I am sure Lefty would give you a review back (if your given review met the review requirements) so PM her about this.

But you have not reviewed Asherah Seirei , so your post should be an off topic post like mine as you are not up next.


Review Asherah Seirei wit this: (Ch. 2 preferred)

3/23/2008 . Edited 3/23/2008 #425
reviewed "bunraku seirei," only chapter one, though... sorry... :\

mary sue, please... thanks!


3/27/2008 #426
did 'mary sue' ch 2

"dragon" (3,4, or 5) please, or 'lady' (ps. lefty, I put the epilogue up)

3/27/2008 #427
I did "Dragon!" Some holes but overall OK!

Can someone do "Hail the Conquering Hero?", please?

3/27/2008 #428
YES! read the epilogue of "dragon." :) it was good. disappointing, though. (not really, but i'm still trying to guilt-trip her.)

mary sue if you can, anything else if you can't. :) thanks!


3/27/2008 #429

it looks like we reviewed at the same time... so... sugaplumprincess owes Lady Myamei Gaua a review on Hail the Conquering Hero.


my "mary sue" or anything else if you can't. thanks!


3/27/2008 #430

jfyi reviewed "Hail the Conquering Hero?"

and guilting isn't going to work lefty :P you guilted me into an epilogue and that's all you're getting for now! plus i really don't know what kind of closure you're looking for :P ha


still lefty's 'Mary Sue'

3/27/2008 #431
Done mary sue

can someone please do A Destiny Unknown or any of my others stories


3/28/2008 #432
Done "Destiny Unknown"

Chapter Seven ---> "Letting Go" Please.


Kaiyako K.

3/28/2008 . Edited 3/28/2008 #433
Fractured Illusion
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Ack, ack.

WishIWasAnEagle , why are you not reviewing a mod properly? :P It's definitely something you can't get away with. As the game is continued though, please give Imalefty another review for that story, this time following the review requirements in the first post carefully. Remember: This is depth. Not easy fix. Major difference.

So: WishIWasAnEagle will give Imalefty another review for Mary Sue that follows the review requirements.


Kaiyako Kagami with "Letting Go" (ch 7 prefered) is still up)

3/28/2008 #434
did "Letting Go" ch 7

Dragon ch 3,4, or 5 please, or Lady ch 2 (or earlier chaps if u must)

3/30/2008 #435
Did ch. 1 of Lady, onto ch 2 (will review that too!)

Someone pop over to The Secret Steps, please? Thanks!

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(Once more, didn't follow strict format, but it still fits within the requirements of two sentences apiece for four different sections.)

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3/30/2008 . Edited 3/30/2008 #436
Reviewed "The Secret Steps", and nice work on that too. :D I hope it helps.

Please review Transcendental.

3/30/2008 #437
Right back atcha (following the criteria this time!) NB: Just my luck; review hardcode decided to clip off half my review. I will PM the rest of it to you.)

The Secret Steps again, por favor.

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By the way, Tane (as I just figured this out for my own stuff):

[ s : 2496912 : Transcendental ]

without spaces...


Tada! Same process for any other story or for poetry.

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3/30/2008 . Edited 3/30/2008 #438
Esther Jade
Done "The Secret Steps" - Quite engrossing.

"Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.


3/31/2008 #439
Reviewed "Heart of the Driechtnacht"! I thought it was quite good, better than the fantasy ones a lot of people write.

Hope you find it helpful! Hopefully, the reiew didn't cut it.

Please review, Transcendental! I might rewrite it though.

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Thanks, thefilmchick!

3/31/2008 #440
Otseis Ragnarok
Reviewed Transendental. Not quite sure I got it, though...

Someone read Together , please.

3/31/2008 . Edited 3/31/2008 #441
Did Together. Hope some of what I said helped, and it'd definitely make an effective prologue to longer writing - let me know if it does get used as such!

Back to (yes, again!) The Secret Steps.

3/31/2008 #442
Done "The Secret Steps"

Someone do "The Last Train" please.

3/31/2008 #443
Done! Ch.2 of The Secret Steps is up; would appreciate a review on the new chapter over there (also going to make a few stylistic corrections to the first part since some things have been appropriately pointed out!)
3/31/2008 . Edited 3/31/2008 #444
I did The secret steps

The Last Summer please (chapter 2 onwards is preferred)

4/1/2008 #445
read "last summer." i missed so many updates... ;_;

"mary sue," please. thanks!


4/1/2008 #446
MS done. (Fungus! XD)

Anything, please!

4/1/2008 #447
read bunraku seirei: midnight laine. oh, forgot to mention that i liked your title. :)

mary sue... preferably chapter 2 or 3, since there are only 4 reviews on them combined. XD (yeah, 14 of my 18 reviews are on the first chapter... sad, right? XD) thank you!


4/1/2008 #448
Just reviewed Mary Sue

Can someone do "Final Goodbye" please.

4/1/2008 #449
Otseis Ragnarok
Read Final Goodbye.... I recommend it to all...

Review anything, please.

4/2/2008 #450
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