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Fractured Illusion

why are we posting our last 10 reviews?

so you can say if we truly do nitpick without any other substances mentioned

me in particular.

SOMEONE GIMME CONCRIT ON MY REVIEWS! :D

2/4/2009 #211
Chasing Skylines

SOMEONE GIMME CONCRIT ON MY REVIEWS! :D

Review Game: We review your reviews.

2/4/2009 #212
Fractured Illusion

"Frac said so" is a nice excuse.

I'm so authoritative in this place, I could be Hitler2

LETS SLAUGHTER THE FLAMERS! They are whats making FP admins not care about us!They're what makes this site go slow! Booo.

*will grow a mustache*

2/4/2009 #213
Fractured Illusion

Review Game: We review your reviews.

Hells yeah

2/4/2009 #214
Fractured Illusion

My opinion of your reviews so far, sesshy is: Long O_O

√ędit: which is a bad thing for me haha, but for the author I dont think so

2/4/2009 . Edited 2/4/2009 #215
Chasing Skylines

LETS SLAUGHTER THE FLAMERS! They are whats making FP admins not care about us!They're what makes this site go slow! Booo.

Yesh! -waves flag with Review printed on a heart-

*will grow a mustache*

Didn't you inherit one from your Viking father? XD

2/4/2009 #216
Fractured Illusion

Didn't you inherit one from your Viking father? XD

No, it was abs.

My first childhood toy was a sword. I stabbed other babies and made them bleed. My parents were so proud...

2/4/2009 #217
Chasing Skylines

√ędit: which is a bad thing for me haha, but for the author I dont think so

I apparently have high stamina for reviewing, someone replied.

XD

My opinion so far: Reminds me of how I review. XD

2/4/2009 #218
Chasing Skylines

Really, though, something I've noticed about your reviews: You balance out the bad with the good.

2/4/2009 #219
Fractured Illusion

Really, though, something I've noticed about your reviews: You balance out the bad with the good.

Yeah I'm awesome like that...

Except when I don't like anything XD

2/4/2009 #220
Chasing Skylines

Man, I'm like a Christian reviewer, as in I preach from the Bible of Literary Technique or something...

2/4/2009 #221
Chasing Skylines

Except when I don't like anything XD

XD Yeah, like Nothings.

2/4/2009 #222
Chasing Skylines

Woah, apparently we preach from the same Bible... XD

2/4/2009 #223
Fractured Illusion

Yeah, like Nothings.

No, I meant like, with Nightmare ch 2, or A Plain Summer. Those were uber-negative reviews.

No review reply from either, also :o So far anyways

2/4/2009 #224
Chasing Skylines

No, I meant like, with Nightmare ch 2, or A Plain Summer. Those were uber-negative reviews.

Really? I just read those. Not too bad. You're blunt but not tearing them apart.

2/4/2009 #225
Fractured Illusion

I think one thing I need to make clear though, is that when I use the "show dont tell", I don't mention that telling is good, but they are overusing it... Every story has to have SOME telling or its horrible. When I point it out though, its because the telling is too much.

2/4/2009 #226
Chasing Skylines

Okay, I think you were having an off day when reviewing A Plain Summer...

2/4/2009 #227
Fractured Illusion

Okay, I think you were having an off day when reviewing A Plain Summer...

XD

I told you.

2/4/2009 #228
Chasing Skylines

I think one thing I need to make clear though, is that when I use the "show dont tell", I don't mention that telling is good, but they are overusing it... Every story has to have SOME telling or its horrible. When I point it out though, its because the telling is too much.

I don't type up a paragraph on 'show, not telling' or vice versa; I find the parts that are blatant, bad telling, and give a showing example/etc. So yeah, same.

Without telling... it is called padding. Which is bad.

2/4/2009 #229
Fractured Illusion

Hey, one thing I just learned from your reviews is regarding Pace. It can be used to mention of the balance between action/dialog and setting/description. Never thought of that :O

2/4/2009 #230
Nicki BluIs

My last ten reviews:

A Promise of Peace (Stories EF)

Till Death Do You Part (Stories EF)

Ten Yrs Later (Stories EF)

skipping the non existant reviews

Newbie Visits The RG

About Our Date

Splinters to Ponder

2/4/2009 #231
Fractured Illusion

Without telling... it is called padding. Which is bad.

didn't know that either XD

2/4/2009 #232
Chasing Skylines

tell frac and sesshy im still linking to my last 10 posts D:

Bubbles is slow. That has been established.

2/4/2009 #233
Fractured Illusion

This thread just got on steroids...

2/4/2009 #234
Chasing Skylines

Hey, one thing I just learned from your reviews is regarding Pace. It can be used to mention of the balance between action/dialog and setting/description. Never thought of that :O

Okay. Hm, yeah.

2/4/2009 #235
Chasing Skylines

Bubbles has seven last ten reviews. XD

2/4/2009 #236
Fractured Illusion

Okay. Hm, yeah.

What? You're skeptic? But that kind of balance can determine is a story is moving unnecessarily slow or fast.

2/4/2009 #237
Fractured Illusion

Bubbles has seven last ten reviews. XD

Bubbles dont get around a whole lot, does she? XD I even see MY piece up there. That was ages ago :O

2/4/2009 #238
Chasing Skylines

didn't know that either XD

Yeah, that's what too much showing is. Yes, like showing someone fears going on airplanes (and it's not necessary to the plot) when it could be summed up in a few lines.

2/4/2009 #239
Fractured Illusion

How bad was my review for A Plain Summer anyways? Sans my mood I myself think I brought up some good points but then again... *has big ego* XD

2/4/2009 #240
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