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Fractured Illusion

This is the place to come if you want reviews for a story, and the review type is "easy fix", aka a simple review.

You can use whichever RG you like: Stories and/or Multi-chap. Just because your story is multi-chap does not mean you cannot use the Story RGs. These RGs are all voluntary.

For Review Game rules and some fun facts, go to "Read this first!".

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FAQ: ยป Two or more people have reviewed the same person! What happens now? Answer

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Moving on, this is the basic structure of the Review Game:

Person 1 says: Review "My Lucky Dream"!

Person 2 says: Ok, I reviewed "My Lucky Dream", ch 1 . So can the next person please review "Stereotypes" or "Window"?

Person 3 says: Done (I did "Window", chapter 4), so can the next person review "Stranger"? Thanks.

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For Stories Easy Fix, your review needs to fulfill these requirements, otherwise you will not be seen as someone who has fulfilled their obligation and you can thus not participate.

REVIEW REQUIREMENTS:

You need to state one thing you liked and *why*, and one thing you didn't like/could be improved, and *why*. Giving more feedback is not prohibited, but giving less than this is. Flaming is also prohibited. Being constructive is not.

If you absolutely can only find good or less good things to say, then please state two things you liked and *why*, or two things you didn't like and *why*. The review will be seen as invalid otherwise.

Restating the same thing does not count as a why. "I really enjoyed the piece because I thought it was very enjoyable" does not count as a why. "I really enjoyed the piece. It was enjoyable because the characters were relateable" does count as a why.

Phrases like "no mistakes" or "good job" do not count as a like. If you cannot find a dislike then write another distinct like do not say "there are no mistakes." That will not count. Saying "good job" or other similar phrases will not count as a like on a piece either. It is not specific.

Here are templates to ensure your review clearly fulfills the qualifications, you can use any of them if you choose, but they are not required:

1) I liked... because... I disliked... because...

2) I liked... because... I liked... because...

3)I disliked... because... I disliked... because...

If you are still unsure on how the review requirement for Easy Fix is viewed, look at this post for guidance.

Note: Commenting on summary and/or title will not count.

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FIRST STORY TO REVIEW:

As this is a continuation of a previous thread, the last participant is the first one up to get a review in here. Dr. Self Destruct is up next with Who's Eating Eric Lynch?.

LET THE GAMES BEGIN!

6/18/2012 . Edited 6/18/2012 #1
TinfoilKnight

Reviewed Who's Eating Eric Lynch, chapter 4

Please review Civil Combat.

6/18/2012 #2
blackflier

reviewed cvivil combat (chapter 1)

Please revies Who killed her

*edit* reviewed : just a pretty face from who is this girl anyway

though i'd say it to avoid confusion.

6/18/2012 . Edited 6/18/2012 #3
Who Is This Girl Anyway

Reviewed Who murdered her?

Please review anything of mine.

6/18/2012 #4
Rogue Energizer Bunny

Reviewed Who Murdered Her.

Please review Meaningless Again.

6/18/2012 . Edited 6/18/2012 #5
lookingwest

--OFF TOPIC--

@Rule 10 Situation: Blackfier owes Who Is This Girl Anyway a review for any of per's prose work.

--END OFF TOPIC--

Rouge Energizer Bunny is up next with Meaningless Again, thanks.

6/18/2012 #6
professional griefer

Reviewed Meaningless Again, ch. 4.

Please review Just Hold On, Cubicles, or Promises.

6/18/2012 #7
Kharmaoftherainbow

Reviewed Cubicles, ch. 1.

Reviews please for Damsels in Distress, preferably ch. 1!

6/18/2012 #8
TinfoilKnight

Reviewed Just Hold On

Please review Civil Combat

6/18/2012 #9
Dr. Self Destruct

----- OFF TOPIC -----

Rule 10: eatmyawesome owes Kharmaoftherainbow a review for Damsels in Distress (preferably chapter 1).

----- END OFF TOPIC -----

Edit: I reviewed Civil Combat (chapter 4).

Please review Who's Eating Eric Lynch?

6/18/2012 . Edited 6/18/2012 #10
OneOriginalThing

reviewed for who's eating eric lynch

please review for Beauty doesn't know the beast preferbly chapter 6

6/18/2012 #11
lookingwest

Reviewed Beauty Doesn't Know The Beast, Ch. 6.

Please review Little Bloodbeat, thank you!

6/18/2012 #12
this wild abyss

I reviewed ch. 8 of Little Bloodbeat

Please review Vespertine

6/18/2012 #13
blackflier

reviewed vespertime

please review who killed herzx

edit: reviewed granny and the smoke war from tinfoilknight

6/18/2012 . Edited 6/18/2012 #14
lookingwest

--OFF TOPIC--

@Blackflier: I'm sorry but your EF review for Vespertine didn't meet the review requirements. You have the likes/dislikes, but you have no whys for them. You can find the ruling in P&Q. Because of them not meeting, you're not up next.

--END OFF TOPIC--

Oogle is up next with Vespertine, thanks!

6/18/2012 #15
TinfoilKnight

Reviewed Who murdered her?

Please review anything of mine, thanks.

--OFF TOPIC--

@Situation: Blackflier owes TinfoilKnight a review for anything on their profile, has one week to complete. (PM also sent)

--END OFF TOPIC--

Oogle is still up next with Vespertine.

6/18/2012 . Edited by lookingwest, 6/18/2012 #16
Themory

(For round five of TDUS - Winner Amiable Ring)

I have reviewed Vespertine please review This Obsession by Amiable Ring. She requests that those I reviewed not review her. Thanks!

6/18/2012 #17
this wild abyss

I reviewed The Obsession by Amiable Ring (http://www.fictionpress.com/r/3032522/)

Please review Vespertine

6/18/2012 #18
professional griefer

Reviewed Vespertine, ch. 7. (and solved the rule ten by reviewing Damsels In Distress, ch. 2)

Please review whatever looks good, preferably Just Hold On.

6/18/2012 . Edited 6/19/2012 #19
The Autumn Queen

Reviewed The Afterthought.

Please review Twenty-Eight Inch Box.

6/19/2012 #20
professional griefer

Reviewed Twenty-Eight Inch Box.

Please review The New Life, ch 3, The Crownless Kings, ch. 4, or Cubicles.

6/19/2012 #21
OneOriginalThing

Reviewed for cubicLes chapter one

Please review for Beauty doesn't know the beast

6/19/2012 #22
Rogue Energizer Bunny

Reviewed Beauty Doesn't Know the Beast(ch. 1).

Please review Meaningless Again.

6/19/2012 . Edited 6/19/2012 #23
professional griefer

Reviewed Meaningless Again, ch. 5.

Please review The New Life(chapter 3), Just Hold On, The Crownless Kings(chapter 4), or Cubicles.

6/19/2012 #24
Rogue Energizer Bunny

Reviewed Cubicles, ch 1.

Please review Meaningless Again.

6/19/2012 #25
Animel

Reviewed Meaningless Again.

Please review Organized Chaos (preferably a later chapter) thank you!

6/19/2012 #26
OneOriginalThing

reviewed for organized chaos chapter one

please review for careful what you wish for

6/19/2012 #27
professional griefer

Reviewed Organized Chaos.

Please review The New Life(ch. 3), The Crownless Kings(ch. 4), Just Hold On, or Cubicles.

6/19/2012 #28
this wild abyss

-- OFF TOPIC --

Rule 10. Animel owes OneOriginalThing a review for Careful What You Wish For.

-- END OFF TOPIC --

Elric (eatmyawesome) is up next with The New Life, The Crownless Kings, Just Hold On, or Cubicles.

6/19/2012 . Edited 6/19/2012 #29
Rogue Energizer Bunny

Reviewed Cubicles.

Please review Meaningless Again.

--MODERATOR NOTICE--

THIS STORY IS NOT UP NEXT ANYMORE! Please make sure you are looking on the LAST PAGE/LAST POST OF THIS THREAD for who is up next!

6/19/2012 . Edited by lookingwest, 5/7/2013 #30
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