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Fractured Illusion

OMG you guys, no one actually had to get banned this time! :D I'm so proud of you all. *sniff*

6/29/2009 #301
Fractured Illusion



Good morning, RG!



"To see a world in a grain of sand,

And a heaven in a wild flower,

Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,

And eternity in an hour."

by William Blake, Auguries of Innocence.

Prompt given by Denizen47, last month's winner.


Because this is a long prompt us mods have decided you need only be inspired by one line if you find it hard to be inspired by the entirety of it.


Remember, even though there must be a connection between your submitted piece and the prompt, you need not make "obvious" connections. The prompt is meant to inspire.

Registrations and submissions have now started! Edit in the link to your piece in your registration post once it has been created. You can register and submit your work until the end of the 7th of July. Remember, one piece per person! We accept both poetry and stories.

If you have any preference on what you want reviewed if you win, write that into your registration post.

It is okay to promote voting through author note or your profile.

If you have any questions, ask at Problems/Questions.

If you find bumps on your way, you can go to Help with your writing and get help there.

Otherwise, Resources for Writing has some nifty links to help you along with uncertain areas.

Good luck everyone!

7/1/2009 . Edited 7/2/2009 #302

... And I just realized I have to withdraw....

Sorry folks. Good luck with the writing.

7/1/2009 . Edited 7/3/2009 #303

oo nice prompt. i enter myself into this contest and promise to review the winner.

Here's My Entry: Beauty

good luck to all:)

7/1/2009 . Edited 7/3/2009 #304

I register for WCC July and will review the winner when I lose! ohyeah.


edit: wheeee, I have an entry! ^^


don't hate me for trying 2nd POV? *brick'd*

7/1/2009 . Edited 7/6/2009 #305
Sercus Kaynine

I register for July WCC and promise to review the winner!


Sadly, I must withdraw from WC this month. I'm going to go on vacation tomorrow and I'll be busy up until then. :( I liked the prompt this month, too.

7/1/2009 . Edited 7/3/2009 #306

I register for July WCC and promise to review the winner regardless.

7/1/2009 #307
tangerine dreamer

i register for the july wcc and promise to review the winner. =]

here's my entry: standstill

in the (unlikely) event that i should win, i'd be happy to recieve reviews on anything, but the reckless years especially.

7/1/2009 . Edited 7/7/2009 #308

I register for WCC July and promise to review the winner~


Edit!: My entry:

7 minutes to spare~

7/1/2009 . Edited 7/11/2009 #309
Lea Ai

I register for July WCC and I will review the winner.

Here is my entry: Continuity Not quite where I want it, but I don't have much time to work on it so it will have to do!

7/1/2009 . Edited 7/3/2009 #310

I register for July WCC and I promise to review the winner.

Oh look a story: Memento Mori

7/1/2009 . Edited 7/1/2009 #311

I'm in and I'll review the winner.

If I do win, feel free to review anything that's not marked "old".

EDIT, my piece: "don't give me your commiseration"

7/1/2009 . Edited 7/4/2009 #312
Engineer of Words

I'm game.

Will review the winner when I inevitably lose, lol.

7/1/2009 #313

EDIT: Sadly, summer school is starting soon, and I won't have time to finish my piece. Therefore, I hereby withdraw from the July Writing Challenge Contest.

7/1/2009 . Edited 7/4/2009 #314
Faithless Juliet

I've read all the rules and will review the winner!!

Here's my entry: William Blake fingering the edge of Revolution

7/1/2009 #315
The Perfect Soldier

I will submit, but I cannot promise to not do something very much like a non-cursory review to the person who is in the position just ahead of the first runner up.

and for the record, i did agree to give an indepth review to the winner.

Edit: Regrettibly i will have to withdraw my submission (teach me to sign up on a holiday weekend) however i will give a review to the winner. good luck to all!

7/2/2009 . Edited 7/7/2009 #316
Fractured Illusion

but I cannot promise to not do something very much like a non-cursory review to the person who is in the position just ahead of the first runner up.

I'm sorry Soldier, but I have no clue what the above even means, and unless you promise to review the winner you cannot be a registered participant. This is regardless if you contribute with a piece or not. So please edit your post if you want to be registered.


Same to you - you also need to promise to review the winner. Please edit.

7/2/2009 #317
Said Author

EDIT: I'm going to be on vacation sometime this month, the date is not specified, so I have to unfortunately withdraw... :(

7/2/2009 . Edited 7/4/2009 #318

I enter and I promise to review the winner!

EDIT: Finally: Here's my entry. Hope I'm just in time!

Letter of Decampment

7/2/2009 . Edited 7/7/2009 #319
Kate Marshall

I really don't know what my silly little head is thinking, but I register for the WCC July. And I of course will review the very deserving winner of said event. :) Happy writing, everyone!

edit entry: 256 shades of gray.

(edit) And if I were to win, I would like something in "Ode to Prompts" or another poem collection reviewed. :)

7/2/2009 . Edited 7/8/2009 #320

I enter the WCC of July, and promise to review the winner when I PHAIL like last time, :D

My entry: Axe Crazy

7/2/2009 . Edited 7/6/2009 #321

I register for the July WCC and promise to review the winner.

7/3/2009 . Edited 7/3/2009 #322

I will not be entering a piece but I do plan to review the winner. Good luck to all the entries so far!

7/3/2009 #323
Sakiru Yume

I register for the July WCC. I will review the winner.

If I win, please review Despair's Calms. Thanks.

My Entry:

7/5/2009 #324

I would like to enter, and I will review the winner.

Here's my entry:

7/7/2009 #325

Aww man, I hope I'm not too late! (If I am, please disregard my entry)

I register for this month's WCC, will review the winner, abide by the rules, etc.

EDIT: here's my entry: Past

7/7/2009 . Edited 7/7/2009 #326
Variable estrella

Finally, my entry! Just in time, too. (At least I hope it's in time) (And if it's not, disregard this entry)

I register for July WCC and I will review the winner and everything.

My entry: Ever

7/7/2009 #327
Pandora's Flight

Ah, yes, I am about 15 minutes late :(

I stumbled upon this forum a while ago, and the prompt gave me an idea, I had to try out, so alas, I'm posting it. You can deny my entry if you choose, technically, it's July 8th right now. I had to write this anyways, one of those compulsive things. I wrote it in about an hour after reading the prompt at 11 PM, haha. I don't have high expectations, but it would be a waste not to try ^_^

I followed the line: "To hold the world in a grain of sand"

Beautiful prompt by the way ♥

It's about 600 words, a very short story.

I'm registering for the first time and I guarantee a review to the winner of this contest :)



The Eternal Masquerade

7/7/2009 #328
Pandora's Flight

GAH! Don't I feel stupid? I'm assuming Fictionpress is located in a time zone different from mine? I live in Michigan, in the good 'ole U.S. of A, and it's 12:15 here. But my post reads 9:15. Three hour time difference? Hmm, what can I do with that? We'll just have to see, I guess I'm editing, lol.

7/7/2009 #329

I hope its not too late! I just found this and would love to try, so I'm hoping that we're running on West Coast time! In the likely event that I do not win, I will be happy to leave a in depth review for the winner of the contest.

Here's my entry, One Night:

7/7/2009 #330
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