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I'll beta anything non-fantasy, no matter how explicit or poorly written XD

I am HARSH and brutally, painfully honest and mostly focus on the aspects of story-writing rather than correcting grammar/spelling mistakes (spelling is a bit better than grammar hehe). I am also up for discussing plots and upcoming stories and misc, blahblah XD

Email/MSN: harlekini@hellokitty.com

11/23/2006 #1
Chelsea O
Hey, i have a new story that i've been working on for a while and would appreciate anyone willing to read it to leave any comments and suggestions! it's work in progress about a cruise ship that is highjacked by would be terrorists. All in all two people escape and end up in the middle of a civil war. full of action and adventure. thanks! -Chelsea
12/8/2006 #2
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Oh gosh honey, I SUCK at action type stories, I really, really do. I'm not good for your job XD
12/10/2006 #3
deep in the high
I need a beta. I just finished the first chapter of the story, it isn't posted. It's a romance, I'm going to out it. See, theres a girl, Breanne, and she's the youngest kid in their family. They're rich people, and the mother is incredibly snobby, in my opinion. I think she'll get better, but...the kids go off to school, and Breanne meets a guy and whatnot. She comes up with some complications along the way, with her family.

Tell me if you can help, I'm looking for someone.

APS

Edit: S***, I forgot. It is um...rated T, but it has some sexual references in the first chapter. I intend to make them die down as the girls stop talking to each other...

9/27/2007 . Edited 9/27/2007 #4
deep in the high
I need a beta. I just finished the first chapter of the story, it isn't posted. It's a romance, I'm going to out it. See, theres a girl, Breanne, and she's the youngest kid in their family. They're rich people, and the mother is incredibly snobby, in my opinion. I think she'll get better, but...the kids go off to school, and Breanne meets a guy and whatnot. She comes up with some complications along the way, with her family.

Tell me if you can help, I'm looking for someone.

APS

9/27/2007 #5
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My email is on my profile, just attach! I have no problems with anything explicit, no matter of what nature.
9/27/2007 #6
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