For reviews on my Story The Dog King. I'd most like constructive one's possibly on chapter 3 or 4 or on the later chapters 8-9 because those have gotten the least feed back. I've heard from most its good, but I'd like to hear about what you think about the plot/ character development and of course my occasional lapse in good grammar.
I do return reviews, but if I get a ton it might take me some time. Thanks so much
Oh dear. I guess I'll do it! You asked for it eh. I want NO EXCUSES! And you better review me back (on my latest story please, not some 200 word poem).7/3/2008 #2
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