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lol well, then, good morning.

7/19/2009 #2,971
The Tragedian

Did Star leave????

7/19/2009 #2,972

Yeah, sorry, I had to eat. I'm back though! :)

7/19/2009 #2,973

welcome back.

7/19/2009 #2,974

I'm sorry if my replies come slow, I'm writing right now. But, hello everyone who just showed up! :)

How is everyone's morning/afternoon?

7/19/2009 #2,975

Hey 89. ^^

7/19/2009 #2,976
The Tragedian

Welcome back, Star.

7/19/2009 #2,977

Merci Huntress, and lefty, sorry, I didn't see your post. :P Thank ya very much.

7/19/2009 #2,978

You're welcome.

7/19/2009 #2,979
The Tragedian

i have 2 awesome news

7/19/2009 #2,980
The Tragedian

uh.....this is the part you say, "what's the awesome news, FOP!?"

7/19/2009 #2,981

Yes, I know, I vanished again...sorry. XP

But..what's the news?

7/19/2009 #2,982

Whats the awesome news?

7/19/2009 #2,983
The Tragedian

1. I finished the music to Saying Goodbye! I'm uploading the video to YouTube. I did with the words so you can sing the song.


7/19/2009 #2,984

Awesome. We should through a party!

7/19/2009 #2,985

Seriously! AWESOME! (especially the second one) Ah..I don't know how to upload things onto youtube...dammit all, there are so many things I could...

7/19/2009 #2,986

Blah, I have to go to work. See you laterz!

7/19/2009 #2,987

K, see ya later 89!

7/19/2009 #2,988

I wish I could at least listen to stuff on youtube.

7/19/2009 #2,989
The Tragedian

it's not that hard. first, you need videos to upload. LOL.

7/19/2009 #2,990
The Tragedian

why not, lefty?

7/19/2009 #2,991

Quick question Huntress, do you think you can catch diseases over the internet? If so, I've caught yours...XP

7/19/2009 #2,992

I'm going to go now. Remember to check out my new story and I'll do the same for you!

7/19/2009 #2,993
The Tragedian

bye lefty!

*gasps and pouts* I do not have diseases....except Phantom-OCD, of course...

7/19/2009 #2,994

bbl, about half an hour. See ya then.

7/19/2009 #2,995
The Tragedian

that's the link to the video

7/19/2009 #2,996

Am posting a new story in a few weeks and looking for advice.

Basic Information:

The story is called Reaper: Rainbow. It is a lot diffrent from my other series in the respect I take more time in a normal world while still intertwining my favorite things to write about. (i.e. first-person female accounts, spirits, chases, creepy stuff and whatnot...though, actually Rainbow is only volume one and *gasp* a few volumes actually have guys for main characters and even *super gasp* adults as main characters, even adults with children and jobs *faints* Oh and one has a main character that is a six year old...)

The basic idea behind these novels is to portray Grim Reapers (*bows* yes, yes, pinnacle of coolness) as normal people. So a person working a day shift (soccer mom) has to turn into a Grim Reaper at midnight and deal with that sort of turmoil, or, in Rainbow, the story is of a suicidal girl in a mental hospital who deals with secrets and always getting in trouble when she can't help it...

Also, I have the cool things....Carriages that fly in the sky and to the World of the Dead, drawn by black unicorns with peacock feathers for wings, and diamond scythes and angel wings...Yes, I admit I went overboard a bit....^^;



But back to advice.

I need help developing internal thoughts and setting. I always have a hard time portraying the way my main characters think, what they are thinking, and the setting, what they are seeing, without being boring....

Help! How do YOU do it, you wonderful writers? ^^;

7/19/2009 #2,997

P.S. I know I can't spell my way out of a paper bag, and if you steal the idea you are a dead man. Or woman.

7/19/2009 #2,998

Am watching the video! (One time in my life Youtube isn't blocked...)

7/19/2009 #2,999
The Tragedian

it's a good idea to delveop a genre before you wriite. Like, is it horror? Romance? Angst, Action? It's also good idea to have a little of everything. Add a little romance, a little horror, a dash of comedy...etc. If you focus on one area, it's gets boring - Just romance becomes sappy and depends on fluff. All horror gets predictable. All action moves too fact. You get the idea.

It's also good to NOT go overboard, it could get confusing and uninteresting for the readers. It could help to get a beta reader.

7/19/2009 #3,000
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